writing 2 for unit 5

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I read this part of Paragraph 5-Paragraph 6 with displeasure, in that the author cites some examples of the benefits of attractive. I don’t think it is right. Nowadays people focus on the beauty of interior characteristics not the appearance. We always say: I am not beautiful, but I am kind.

I shake about the physical-attractiveness stereotype in the sixth paragraph. In my opinion, the children’s stories are perfect, so everything about the good side is good not only the interior, but the exterior, on the converse, everything of the bad side is bad.

I feel happy that the author uses ‘however’ in the seventh paragraph, because the idea about this part [the fifth and sixth paragraph] is not [completely] correct.

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